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Placed First in: 1398 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand

Rainbow Hiku 42

                                              Rainbow Hiku 42

sun and rain courting in sky
hues of hope high~
nature`s charm to the eyes.

                                                            n    g     i   
                                                      i                            n
                                              t               p        e                   s
                                        r            o                             h                             
                                  u          h         t   h   e      e    y           i          k
                              o         f         o                                e          g                                                                                                    
 sun and rain     c          o        t                                          s.         h~    y                                                       
                                                                                                     
  h ~~u ~~e ~~s               
            
  n –a –t –u –r -e`s   charm
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Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 6:31 AM
Very pretty. Congrats in the contest
Kendrick Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 1:30 PM
Creative layout in this rainbow. Way to go with this winner. Congrats. Sara K
George Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 3:08 AM
Lovely graphic representation of the rainbow in the sky. Beautiful haiku too. Congratulations dear friend on your first place win.
Poet Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 12:23 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your contest trophy win, Krish
Guptar Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 7:59 AM
Thank you dear poet for appreciating the write and for your kind wishes. Your inspiring comments enliven my spirit
Poet Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 12:08 PM
Great representation of the rainbow in this schematic haiku. Best wishes for the contest
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