Rainbow Gold

glistening rainbow lead on to your pot of gold while you cast colour

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Line Gauthier

Date: 9/21/2017 7:58:00 PM

Very clever - so succinct and perfect

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/28/2015 12:31:00 PM

Hmmn...pretty as can be. Soupie

Skat A

Date: 5/12/2015 1:52:00 PM

beautiful.... skat

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/24/2014 6:52:00 AM

Shadow . . . A quiet beautiful Haiku here. Enjoyed this one very much. The short writes can be, as in this instance, quite powerful. This one's a "7" too!! Best Wishes, Gary

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/24/2014 8:26:00 AM

ty Gary so kind of you I do like the tradition form of haiku which are always on nature in which simplicity works well. hugs

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/29/2014 3:04:00 PM

Oh so beautiful, Shadow. I love uplifting haiku and now I have a new favorite. Love, Carolyn

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 8/28/2014 6:52:00 PM

nicely painted picture linda dear friend full of gold smiling brings happy memories flooding back for me god bless you

Jan Allison

Date: 8/28/2014 6:46:00 PM

wonderful imagery Shadow. i adore rainbows and have a rainbow sapphire ring and necklace - they always make me smile and feel happy when i wear them:-) Hugs jan xx