Rainbow Child

Rainbow Child I close my eyes and see a rainbow bright. The firm footsteps of my ancestors echoing through the night, and know that the red blood that flows within my blue veins are a living, surviving part of them. Even though they are long gone, their essence will never die because I will carry on their sacred legacy, I am their rainbow child! Spain, Mexico, Africa cry out loudly to me – you are our brown skinned progeny, you are our rainbow child!
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Callus Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 7:24 AM
Full marks for such a lovely and meaningful poem, Kika! It is true...the essence of our ancestors will never die! ~ Best regards // paul
A   Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 12:49 AM
Kika, Congratulations in the SKAT contest. LINDA
Ayala Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 10:25 AM
Thank you, Linda, with much appreciation for your very kind words that mean a lot to me! I am happy you enjoyed my work. Kika
Sietesantos Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 9:49 PM
Congratulations, dear Kika on well-deserved win! A-7! Pandita
Ayala Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 9:56 PM
Thank you, Pandita, for your kind congratulations and high score! Kika
A. Sharma Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:47 PM
Congrats on ur great win with this colourful write Kika!
Ayala Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 9:54 PM
Thanks, Dr. Sharma, I really appreciate your kind comments on my poem! Thank you so much! Kika
Gulley Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:28 AM
What a lovely way to express the rainbow of souls in God's colorful world of love. Congratulations on your win in the contest my pen friend. A lovely write and read......Sharon : ) Enjoyed this so much.
Ayala Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 9:53 PM
Thank you, Sharon,with much appreciation for your very kind words that mean a lot to me! I am happy you enjoyed my work. Kika
A  Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 9:52 AM
Kika, Congratulations on your awesome colored win. Drop by my blog " Character Sketch" if ya like. LOVE ** SKAT **
Ayala Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 9:51 PM
Skat, I am so happy that you selected this piece to be on your winner's list! Thank you! Kika
Eastman Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 10:17 AM
Your poetry and thoughts always flow so beautifully... You are one of my favorite poets. Congratulations on the win.
Ayala Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 7:40 PM
Dear Carol, I am sorry for not getting back to you earlier. I have been very sick and I try to respond as I can. Thank you so very much my dear for the wonderful compliments you left me. I can't tell you how much they mean to me and how they have helped to brighten my spirits! Thank you! Kika
Sietesantos Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 8:39 PM
Well done, Kika! Congratulations on this well-deserved win! Pandita
Ayala Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 6:30 PM
Thank you, dear Pandita for you kind compliments and comments, my friend! Kika
Jamoner Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 12:24 PM
Congratz on your win! ^^
Ayala Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 11:29 PM
Hi Doris, I so very much appreciate your congratulations! Kika
Kayode Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 8:44 AM
It is nice to see this super one on the winning list,congrats Kika.
Ayala Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 11:28 PM
Thank you, my friend with much appreciation for your very kind words! Kika
Mehta Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 5:41 AM
Nicely worded poem, Kika, congrats on the win
Ayala Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 11:27 PM
Thank you, Dr. Mehta for your kind congratulations! Kika
Allison Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 4:57 AM
you have painted a beautiful picture - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Ayala Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 11:26 PM
Jan, thank you very much for your kind congratulations! Kika
Konos Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 11:44 PM
No bad writers in this contest! You were fast, furious, humorous, romantic,lost, found, sought after, wondrous! THANKS FOR ENTERING! I'M HAPPY!
Ayala Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 11:24 PM
Hi Judy I am very happy you chose my poem as a winner in your contest! Thank you so very much! Best wishes. Kika
Carrillo Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 11:13 PM
A beautiful picture you have painted here with your words. Welcome to our Soup family of poets. Many blessings... Lucilla
Ayala Avatar
September 5, 2014 at 7:25 AM
Hi Lucilla, thank you so much for complimenting me! Have a nice weekend! Kika
Richards Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 10:06 PM
Fantastic poetry very well written
Ayala Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 8:29 AM
Hi Lisa, thank you so much. I really appreciate your visit. Kika
Nance Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 11:38 AM
What beautiful rainbows that make up an individual. Well said! :) Keep writing spectacular poems :)
Anish Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 4:30 PM
What a pretty, moving write! Every one ahs greatness in their genes. If only everyone could express it the way you do things would be better for all! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Ayala Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 9:45 AM
My dear Michael, thank you so very much for your kind comments and compliments! Best wishes to you, my friend! Kika.
A   Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 3:20 PM
Thank you for the reply...PD
A  Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 8:09 PM
Kika,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Ayala Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 11:51 PM
Hi SKAT, thanks for stopping by and for your warm welcome which I so appreciate. I am really encouraged by all the great poets on this site and hope that I can become better as I go along. Best wishes. Kika
Gibson Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 6:07 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Kika. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
Ayala Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 3:32 PM
Hi Faye, thank you very much for your warm welcome which I greatly appreciate! I look forward to great interactions with fellow poets.
Gadou Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 6:36 PM
An artistic continent crossing flow of nature, wonderful!
Ayala Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 3:29 PM
Hi Ziad, thank you for your wonderful compliments!
Goudreau Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 11:24 PM
The rainbow child lives on within their sacred legacy. An inspiring read. Well done!
Ayala Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 2:19 PM
Hi Suzanne, thank you so very much for your comments and great compliments!
Nasir Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 3:15 PM
loved it :-)
Ayala Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 2:20 PM
Hina, I am so glad that your enjoyed this piece. Thanks very much!
Das Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 3:09 AM
thanx kika for the comment ...hmm fantastic rainbow color or peoples color great composition i liked it ...best of luck
Ayala Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 2:22 PM
Hi Hari, thank you for visiting and I am glad that you enjoyed this piece. Best wishes.
De La Luna Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 8:35 PM
I love it how you put multiculturalism in rainbow colors and how it can exist in one person alone. Beautiful!
Ayala Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 3:53 PM
Thanks, hija. I really appreciate your kind comments on my poem!
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