Notes About The Poem

This poem was based on stories I used to tell my granddaughter when she was a toddler back in the 90s. The poem's storyline is one of many that I made up for her, because her request was always, "Grandma, tell me about Rainbow Cat," and I would follow with another tale -- I made up so many!  Writing this poem brought back many memories.

Rainbow Cat

They say just there beyond the valley, that
there lived inside a house, a little cat
who never went outside to run and play;
she had to spend her time indoors each day.

Beside the window, curled up on a chair,
her heart was saddened by the nasty glare
of every cat that passed within her sight-
with eyes of fear and looking for a fight.

One day, a while back, she’d gone outside,
but never stayed out long- came in to hide.
The kitties laughed and chided her, and so
would not befriend her; she became their foe.

They called her Rainbow Cat- her owners named
her that, because her fur was brightly flamed
with colors- yellow, green and red, and blue
laid out in arcs; like rainbows, her fur grew.

Now Rainbow Cat, aware that she was shy
and different from others that passed by,
began to think of other ways to cope-
to make them like her- so there was some hope.

She thought and thought, whatever can I do
to let them know beneath this colored ‘doo’
there lives a nice smart kitten just like them
and, not a kitty cat they should condemn.

That night it came to her within a dream;
come morning, she began to smile and beam.
Her owner left the door somewhat ajar
as they left home for shopping in their car.

Her bowl of yummy dry food in the room
was filled up to the top and without gloom,
she carried dry food nibbles, one by one,
out through the door onto the porch, till done.

She stood beside her feast- began to eat;
and soon the cats came by, did not retreat-
But, closer to the porch they came to see
that Rainbow Cat had planned a cat party.

They came to share the feast each, one by one,
and Rainbow Cat was happy they had come!
The cats now saw beneath her rainbow fur-
she was a kitty just like them and purred.


November 2, 2014

~1st Place~
Contest: Sweet Fairytale For Children
Sponsor: BJ Legros Kelley
Judged: 05/06/2023

~1st Place~
Contest: Fable to the Rescue
Sponsor: Carol Eastman
Judged 11/18/2014

Moral:  Never judge people by how they look:
What is inside is what really counts.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 5/9/2023 11:48:00 PM
Congratulations, Sandra. Is it just me or is there a parable for our times in there?
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/10/2023 6:23:00 AM
Hi, Suzette, I suppose there could be a parable for our times in my poem. I posted this poem on PS in 2014, but it was one of the many stories I made up about 'rainbow cat' over 20 years ago for my granddaughter who is now 28! Thank you so much for stopping by, and for the congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/7/2023 4:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win, Dear Sandra. This is a fabulous poem - Rainbow Cat is adorable! Your granddaughter must be so lucky to listen to stories from you - stories which you created for her!
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Date: 5/6/2023 9:26:00 PM
Another lovely win Sandra! Such a kind, gentle and adorable poem! Absolutely precious! We much appreciated the spaced format which presented in such a beautiful poem all around :)
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Date: 5/13/2016 9:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/13/2016 1:22:00 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on the win. Stop and enjoy my blog "Peace is a Fugitive." SKAT LOVE
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/13/2016 3:07:00 PM
Thank you, Skat. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/19/2014 8:47:00 PM
Nicely written. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/19/2014 10:04:00 AM
Adorable story with a great moral Sandra. Congratulations on your win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/19/2014 5:14:00 PM
Thank you Brenda. One of my granddaughter (now 20) always wanted me to tell her about "Rainbow" cat. I based this poem on one of the tales I used to make up for her. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/18/2014 6:41:00 PM
Cute story and I love the moral at the end - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/19/2014 5:15:00 PM
Hi Jan, thank you so much for your nice comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/3/2014 3:26:00 PM
a cute story you concocted. I also think they were jealous they did not have her rainbow colors. WEll done!! CArol will love it.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/3/2014 5:08:00 PM
Andrea, I loved writing this one. I don't know if you read the 'poet's note' above my poem, but past memories inspired me. Thanks for your positive comment. Sandra
Date: 11/2/2014 4:49:00 PM
Nice metered poem you have written Sandra, you kept it going for quite awhile!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/2/2014 4:51:00 PM
Hi Dan, so glad you like it. It was a fun one to create for the Fable contest. Thanks! Sandra
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