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Rainbow

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Written: June 4th, 2024, For Andrea Dietrich ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ After the rain, my eyes were blithe, Rainbow spans the sky, deft and lithe. For a terse glance, it will remain. My eyes were blithe . . . after the rain. Shades of beat! crimson-cyan blue. A quite brilliant and sparkly hue. Incite me to yearn for this treat. Crimson-cyan blue, shades of beat. With charm, I stare, watching it fade. Impressing splendor, God has made. Auspiciously, an awe-sight rare! Watching it fade with charm, I stare. This stunning sight cannot grow old. Just to grasp, it's a drill of gold. Always an enchanting delight. Cannot grow old this stunning sight.
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Date: 7/1/2024 10:04:00 AM
Crimson-cyan. So pretty, Sotto. Gotta love those rainbows. Congrats
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Date: 6/6/2024 6:05:00 PM
love the introduction of shades of beat (?beet), crimson-cyan blue…so interesting. The impressing splendor God has made..sight never grows old! Enjoyed, Lasaad! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 6/6/2024 4:11:00 PM
Such vivid and brilliant imagery throughout this poem! Great work! ... Witnessing a rainbow is always an exciting moment and one to savor while it lasts :)
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Date: 6/6/2024 9:34:00 AM
SP, amazing how you capture the awe of seeing a rainbow. You do make it seem like a treat. It is always fun indeed and just reading this makes me long to see one right now. The emotion you capture before, the indifference, adds to the pleasure of this happening.
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Date: 6/4/2024 4:38:00 PM
just wonderful, i think looking heavens can help, this is great and helpful poetry, Sotto, thanks a lot
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