Rainbow

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Written: June 4th, 2024, For Andrea Dietrich ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ After the rain, my eyes were blithe, Rainbow spans the sky, deft and lithe. For a terse glance, it will remain. My eyes were blithe . . . after the rain. Shades of beat! crimson-cyan blue. A quite brilliant and sparkly hue. Incite me to yearn for this treat. Crimson-cyan blue, shades of beat. With charm, I stare, watching it fade. Impressing splendor, God has made. Auspiciously, an awe-sight rare! Watching it fade with charm, I stare. This stunning sight cannot grow old. Just to grasp, it's a drill of gold. Always an enchanting delight. Cannot grow old this stunning sight.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2024 10:04:00 AM

Crimson-cyan. So pretty, Sotto. Gotta love those rainbows. Congrats

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/6/2024 6:05:00 PM

love the introduction of shades of beat (?beet), crimson-cyan blue…so interesting. The impressing splendor God has made..sight never grows old! Enjoyed, Lasaad! Hugs ~ Kim

Kelly Deschler

Date: 6/6/2024 4:11:00 PM

Such vivid and brilliant imagery throughout this poem! Great work! ... Witnessing a rainbow is always an exciting moment and one to savor while it lasts :)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 6/6/2024 9:34:00 AM

SP, amazing how you capture the awe of seeing a rainbow. You do make it seem like a treat. It is always fun indeed and just reading this makes me long to see one right now. The emotion you capture before, the indifference, adds to the pleasure of this happening.

Yann Rolland

Date: 6/4/2024 4:38:00 PM

just wonderful, i think looking heavens can help, this is great and helpful poetry, Sotto, thanks a lot