Rainbow

A promise made, a sign praised, a film, a song, a fairy tale. A spectrum of waves, an arc of rays, a rainy, sunny, nature parade. A lullaby played, a golden trade, a dream, a vision, a wonder cascade. A time to believe, a time to pray, a hope, a vision, a better day.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/9/2020 5:48:00 PM

Light as a feather; just perfect for the portrait of a rainbow, Jennie! Hats off to you! And welcome to Poetry Soup! Best wishes, Gershon

Jennie Cooper
Date: 7/10/2020 6:51:00 PM

Thank you Gershon

John Watt

Date: 7/3/2020 5:00:00 PM

Loved the flow of this, and the many aspects of how we view rainbows. It certainly has become a powerful contemporary icon for diversity; I also enjoy the traditional views of promise and hope. Well done, enjoyed this very much ~ John

Jennie Cooper
Date: 7/7/2020 6:37:00 AM

Thank you so much :-)

Eric Boddie

Date: 6/29/2020 10:08:00 AM

where all the colors combine....where all colors can shine....if only this concept could reach our feeble minds....we could peacefully intertwine....with the respectful design....which was Constructed By The Divine....Beautiful words jennie....;)

Jennie Cooper
Date: 6/30/2020 3:07:00 PM

Thank you :-)

Silent One

Date: 6/29/2020 9:26:00 AM

Beautiful attitude and outlook...

Jennie Cooper
Date: 6/29/2020 9:48:00 AM

Thank you