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Rainbow

The other day I was lucky enough, to see you; you made my blush you made me cry you churned the sky with every color known to man; God adjusted the lens I looked again, sure enough you streaked the sky with crayon shades on cue; Your repertoire of color surpasses every dream. Oct. 24, 2018

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Date: 10/24/2018 4:28:00 PM
I've seen a few poems on this theme so far. Yours being the most succinct and with the most impact on me. Really lovely
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Date: 10/24/2018 3:27:00 PM
I love this piece; rainbows are beautiful and this paints one perfectly.
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Date: 10/24/2018 2:55:00 PM
What a lovely poem that personifies the rainbow so well! Sometimes our own speculation about things, like what causes a rainbow to form, gives us far more pleasure than the scientific explanation. This poem is now a new fave for me, Pixie Dust. Awesome! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 10/24/2018 1:01:00 PM
- It's beautiful to see, Pixie :) - A lovely poem - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/24/2018 10:04:00 AM
Lovely! Sweet ink :)
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Date: 10/24/2018 6:45:00 AM
Yes--a beautiful rainbow...in your words that painted the sky.
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