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A fireball sun peeked through clouds Moisture laden cobalt blue Rain weary traveller sighs deep sigh, raindrops spring true Soon apricot fills spaces within A lighter cloud of gray Opening up to reveal sun's Illumination ray Daffodils lift their heads to sun When its clear beams exposed Delighted to be raised to life Their awesome colors posed Written Saturday February 28, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/7/2015 7:45:00 AM
Beautiful images, Sara. I think we all feel like weary travelers after this winter.
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Date: 3/5/2015 12:38:00 PM
Delightful take on the image Sara, very nice indeed, James :) :)
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Date: 3/4/2015 2:57:00 PM
O' Spring, where art thou warm breath; O' Earth, where art thou sunshine face. Great song of sunshine and Spring. Good word usage and rhyming. Great work... j
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Date: 3/4/2015 2:21:00 PM
I feel wonderful reading this piece, sara.. you uplift.. thanks for the soupie; will write you soon.. huggs
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Date: 3/4/2015 11:39:00 AM
Wonderful cleansing write. Your awesome Sara..BG
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Date: 3/4/2015 9:33:00 AM
Wonderful feeling after a rain and smells so clean. Wonderful write Sara. Blessings
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