Rain Taps

Rain taps, rain taps tapping on my window Sounding like a voice singing softly A mermaid's song of Enchantments and callings Luring me to the window Craving to hear more

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Paul Callus

Date: 11/30/2022 11:56:00 PM

The sound of tapping rain often attracts our attention, Daisy. I love how you describe your feelings. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul

Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/29/2022 4:36:00 AM

Beautiful. Congratulations!

Beata Agustin

Date: 11/28/2022 7:53:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/28/2022 6:29:00 PM

Dear Daisy, the rain’s song is so alluring.. your poem captures the magic of the musical taps on your window beautifully. Congratulations for your excellent win in Line’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/28/2022 2:48:00 PM

Enchanting raindrops. Love it Daisy! Congratulations on your win! :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/28/2022 1:01:00 PM

charming poem ~ love the comparison of rain to a mermaid's song.