Rain Taps

Rain taps, rain taps tapping on my window
Sounding like a voice singing softly
A mermaid's song of
Enchantments and callings
Luring me to the window
Craving to hear more

rainfree verse

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Paul Callus

November 30, 2022 at 11:56 PM

The sound of tapping rain often attracts our attention, Daisy. I love how you describe your feelings. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul

Christuraj Alex

November 29, 2022 at 4:36 AM

Beautiful. Congratulations!

Beata Agustin

November 28, 2022 at 7:53 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.

Susan Ashley

November 28, 2022 at 6:29 PM

Dear Daisy, the rain’s song is so alluring.. your poem captures the magic of the musical taps on your window beautifully. Congratulations for your excellent win in Line’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan