Roy Pett Poet Rhyme

Rain Storm

Rain storm 

Twas spectacular, storm of summer storms 
natures animosity, and fury 
Peppery grey clouds soberly transforms 
glorious day into horror story, 
silver spears pelted earth in such glory 
illuminated electrified arc 
horizon to horizon, sight blurry 
mist from evaporation, must embark 
Create pure place of sanctuary, build an ark.

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Rachel Treacher March 22, 2026 at 11:43 AM I am really enjoying how you use your last lines in your poems -so clever with gentle surprises.

Demetrios Trifiatis July 4, 2018 at 1:04 PM A storm so well painted by your words dear Roy! Enjoyed it! Roy Pett July 4, 2018 at 2:54 PM Thank you so much for your very kind comment Demetrios, so pleased to receive such a comment from an accomplished poet as you. :))

Al Juman July 4, 2018 at 12:03 PM This is simply very well written Keep it up my friend Roy Pett July 4, 2018 at 2:52 PM Thank you so much for your very kind comment Al much appreciated. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen July 4, 2018 at 8:51 AM - Wonderfully described, Roy - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Roy Pett July 4, 2018 at 10:01 AM Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Anne-Lise, really appreciated. :))

Lyric Man July 3, 2018 at 7:39 AM I loved your rhyming rain storm!! Roy Pett July 3, 2018 at 12:16 PM Thank you so much for your very kind comment Lyric Man. :))

Silent One July 3, 2018 at 6:57 AM Great rhymes Roy... Roy Pett July 3, 2018 at 12:12 PM Thank you so much Silent One, your comment is very encouraging. :))

Tom Cunningham July 2, 2018 at 9:45 PM I love summer like anyone else but I love to see a good storm in all its glory,like the line silver spears, very well written Roy,good luck. Tom. PS, greetings from Turkey. Roy Pett July 3, 2018 at 5:28 AM Thanks Tom, I can’t get enough of this wonderful weather but my garden certainly needs a good shower, hope you are enjoying yourself there in Turkey, went to Bodrum many years ago we loved it, thanks again for your support and best wishes. :))

Kim Rodrigues July 2, 2018 at 7:03 PM The mix between beauty and fear is electrifying! Nice one! Roy Pett July 3, 2018 at 5:23 AM Thank you so much for your very kind comment Kim much appreciated. :))