Rain Storm

Rain storm 

Twas spectacular, storm of summer storms 
natures animosity, and fury 
Peppery grey clouds soberly transforms 
glorious day into horror story, 
silver spears pelted earth in such glory 
illuminated electrified arc 
horizon to horizon, sight blurry 
mist from evaporation, must embark 
Create pure place of sanctuary, build an ark.

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/4/2018 1:04:00 PM

A storm so well painted by your words dear Roy! Enjoyed it!

Roy Pett
Date: 7/4/2018 2:54:00 PM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Demetrios, so pleased to receive such a comment from an accomplished poet as you. :))

Al Juman

Date: 7/4/2018 12:03:00 PM

This is simply very well written Keep it up my friend

Roy Pett
Date: 7/4/2018 2:52:00 PM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Al much appreciated. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/4/2018 8:51:00 AM

- Wonderfully described, Roy - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett
Date: 7/4/2018 10:01:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Anne-Lise, really appreciated. :))

Lyric Man

Date: 7/3/2018 7:39:00 AM

I loved your rhyming rain storm!!

Roy Pett
Date: 7/3/2018 12:16:00 PM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Lyric Man. :))

Silent One

Date: 7/3/2018 6:57:00 AM

Great rhymes Roy...

Roy Pett
Date: 7/3/2018 12:12:00 PM

Thank you so much Silent One, your comment is very encouraging. :))

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/2/2018 9:45:00 PM

I love summer like anyone else but I love to see a good storm in all its glory,like the line silver spears, very well written Roy,good luck. Tom. PS, greetings from Turkey.

Roy Pett
Date: 7/3/2018 5:28:00 AM

Thanks Tom, I can’t get enough of this wonderful weather but my garden certainly needs a good shower, hope you are enjoying yourself there in Turkey, went to Bodrum many years ago we loved it, thanks again for your support and best wishes. :))