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Rain, Steam and Speed, JMW Turner

and in their cold 
          condemning eyes ~
I am forever framed 
      as flawed fragments 
bolted to the brutal beginnings,
oblivious to the wings of an end...
yet the intrinsic ink of my soul
knows not the art
of stirring superficial stars 

 ~ fear not my antique antlers
caressed with copper compassion,
     I am not their synonym
       for emotional emptiness ~

let me breathe away
from counterfeit lies
pretending to be holier
than the highest of halos,
tainting truth with
tomb tongue-twisters 

I choose to follow the rain
before the rising
of opalescent light ~ 
I seek streaks of sleep’s
sweet silver steam
blurring the smoke
above the veiled valley
of murky melancholy ~
traveling through the mists
of memories and magic...

I am tied to the unarmed
acceleration of alchemy,
an ambience of adoration
where poetry is resurrected ~
reconstructed amongst the
rushing resilience of rust...

I am the maternal momentum
of the mystical movers,
an unmistaken metaphor
for what sighs within the
magnetic embers
of locomotive silence,
rapidly ringing the sounds
of the sky-draped sea ~

trace this track of serene tears...
I taste time as 
         the ultimate revealer
of what beautifully remains ~
deep in the depths
of delightful devotion,
no longer a grey amongst
the steel of stolen secrets…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kendrick Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 2:36 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Great choice of art to describe. Sara K.
Winter Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 7:48 PM
Dear I E gorgeous writing! Elegant way to write a poem! I love it :) Best, Anne
Hind Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 5:18 PM
wow, gorgeous writing, Ink...it is sort of haunting- <3
Bordner Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 7:37 AM
An eloquent declaration of self determinism harmonizing with Time, synchronicity, and love Poetess...a courageous confrontation, Inward and Outward, culminating in a true conviction of self respect...J.A.B.
Croft Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 2:08 AM
congratulations on your win!
Cunningham Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 12:39 AM
You've done it yet again another gem from your gifted pen IE. Growing up trains back then were steam, sadly now they're diesel or electric but they lack the character of the old steam trains. Progress I suppose. Have a lovely weekend. Tom
Liguori Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 6:00 PM
‘traveling through the mists of memories and magic’… I like these words. Wonderful poem here Ink!!
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 5:57 PM
Oh love that ending "I taste time". You have such original creative phrases flowing from your pen. I am afraid that painting isn't one I would be Able to write about but it sure was an inspiration for you! Is this for Brian's contest. I am sure it will do well
Lawless Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 5:16 PM
the mysterious hum of the rail, the alliterative click-clack of faded wheels dreaming of silvery rails.....well...anyway....this is fantastic. a metaphorically unseen, unheard ever-present Hobo's lament. a must FAVE.....
Bob Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 4:55 PM
Congratulations!
DiMino Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 2:28 PM
"I taste time as the ultimate revealer of what beautifully remains ~ deep in the depths of delightful devotion," -- Time reveals, challenges, friend to the terminally ill and those blessed with love. An end to torment, while an eternity of joy when shared with someone special. My timeless memories are stored and treasured. I think they are what I will always carry and share. Great poetry my friend.
Onpaper Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 8:55 AM
their cold condemning eyes .. mmmmmm!! I am forever framed as flawed fragments … never in my eyes papiiiiii!! bolted to the brutal beginnings, this line is gorgeously heavy!!! fear not my antique antlers yeazzzzzz queeeeeen! caressed with copper compassion, tainting truth with tomb tongue-twisters … yazzzz alliterationssss!!! trace this track of serene tears... ayeee papi i be tracing n tracking n stalkiiiiiin!!! I shall taste the time tooo!!! I taste time as the ultimate revealer.. I am on my way to it! Absolutely stunning piece papi!!! Pairs up with the art piece perfectly!!!
Empress Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 1:03 PM
Lolololol i know
Onpaper Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 1:02 PM
Aye aye ayaaaaa mi lau u lon lon thaaaaaaaim!!!! <3
Empress Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 9:33 AM
Awee papi! La u long time
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