Rain Song

Standing in the rain,
changing from,
translucent
      to solid,
feeling the different
   sensations
       as the water
                  collects
and falls
      through my body,
  bliss takes over me
and I remember
          something from some songs,
5 to 1 baby,
      1 in 5
no one here 
     gets out alive,
this is the year
    that hope failed you
for I still 
   walk the Earth
and I won't leave
one of my victims deserted.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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