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Shinny was the bike Rain smiled , it liked It decided to strike Mud puddle went the bike

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Date: 7/19/2021 1:18:00 AM
This is so cute Eve. Love it and the pic is perfect. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/18/2021 11:24:00 AM
Like Jo, I too can visualize it plus the picture makes it complete!! Let me check out your pantoum . the contest looks fun, and I want to tell you something else: I got the book the other day of our nursery rhymes. OMG, Eve, it is SO pretty. Soupmail.
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Date: 7/17/2021 3:18:00 AM
I can see that in my mind's eye, Eve, great poem:)
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Date: 7/16/2021 10:29:00 PM
Child's memories? Interesting. Hugs.
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Date: 7/16/2021 6:47:00 PM
Oh my, I love rain but sometimes it gets muddy lol, hope all is well. much love to you, xo
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