Rain or Shine

The rain is singing
Soaking the leafy terrain
With splashy songs of puddles

The sun is smiling
Spreading a golden kindness
Through its glazed misty snuggles
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Baker Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 11:11 PM
Nice Sedoka, Smita. It has a nice rhythm to it. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Kulkarni Avatar
February 26, 2024 at 10:11 AM
Thank you, Bill for your kind words!
Bowring Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 7:04 AM
Love the imagery in this delightful poem dear Smita. ‘ The rain is singing’ - such a lovely line and makes me think of rainfall and its orchestrated rhythm. The last line is enchanting. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you for a great weekend :)
Kulkarni Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 11:27 AM
Thank you, Christina for your inspiring feedback. Much appreciated!
Rose  Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 6:30 PM
I never saw a sun smile but the way you describe it it sound amazing, dear poet
Kulkarni Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 11:27 AM
The rain sings and the sun smiles for me :). Loved reading your sweet comments!
Pandit Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 2:41 PM
Two images elegantly captured, Smita--much enjoyed the contrast in the poem as it turns to shine from rain.
Kulkarni Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 11:26 AM
Thanks for your visit and the uplifting feedback Vijay!
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