Rain On the Roof

Intermittent pizzicato music
Comforting and soothing sound   
Soft slumber coming soon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 2:50 PM
Just beautiful Barbara >> James
Austin Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 7:27 AM
Being a retired professional violinist, I enjoyed your use of pizzicato to indicate, perhaps, tiny creatures of the night whispering in their little,coarse voices. Hey! It's better than sheep. Love, daver
Guzzi Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 1:53 PM
ohhhh I love rain on the roof..ever hear it on a tin roof? Light & love
Pickett Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 4:42 AM
Good form the Kimo.... Keep em comin...:JP]
Chircop Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 11:18 PM
Wonderful Kimo,I can feel me inmy living room,hearing the Rain on my roof top..loved it..Charma
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February 10, 2010 at 4:47 PM
Nice use of alliteration with an artistic flair. I really like the opening line. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Karen
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