Rain of Torture

The needles
Of thousands
and of millions
pour on me,
Drenching me
with its
Arctic temperature.
Each drop is like
a frozen amber,
Smouldering
at absolute zero.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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January 20, 2017 at 5:44 AM
Smouldering at absolute zero is no doubt interesting and nicely metaphorical too ... A good write ...
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