Rain Falling

rain falling gently last snow disappearing sounds muffled AP: 1st place 2021 Posted on May 21, 2018

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/26/2018 12:44:00 AM

The story behind this I would like to see in a narrative poem, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/26/2018 8:21:00 AM

Yes, it would be wonderful. Thanks for your visit and inspirational comment, Caren.

Mick Talbot

Date: 5/25/2018 4:11:00 AM

each word heartfelt... begs for another... keep your well full...

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/25/2018 5:00:00 AM

Thanks, Mick, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/22/2018 6:47:00 PM

The natural and emotional imagery are so compelling and compatible in your sadly beautiful haiku, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/22/2018 7:48:00 PM

Thank you so much for your touching comment, Susan. Most appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2018 2:50:00 PM

this one is fantastic. Probably the best of the bunch.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/22/2018 4:17:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea.

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 5/22/2018 9:47:00 AM

Beautifully poignant.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/22/2018 4:17:00 PM

Thank you, Dale. Much appreciated.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/22/2018 6:40:00 AM

Nice one Line :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/22/2018 6:43:00 AM

Thanks, Heidi.