Rain Drops

Rain drops hitting the warm pavement such a delightful smell. Written 6-17-11

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Ingibo Benson

Date: 7/11/2011 2:14:00 PM

A fine piece, James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/5/2011 4:04:00 PM

The aroma of rain is wonderful..Excellent expression of that topic..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 7/5/2011 10:44:00 AM

Yes, as you say, that delightful smell. Lovely descriptive write, James

Judy Ball

Date: 6/22/2011 3:10:00 PM

Very nicely done my friend. Good imagery. One typo: second line from the top. `pavement`instead of payment. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2011 11:13:00 PM

SWEET!

Kash Poet

Date: 6/20/2011 8:28:00 PM

Excellent Haiku!I find scent of a woman in that smell.May I request you to read my poem 'Rain,Earth and Me'.Thanks for your inspiring words at my pages.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/20/2011 2:42:00 PM

walking in the rain is lovely with the one u luv James.. a soothing calming write my friend..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/20/2011 12:11:00 PM

James, this haiku embraces so many senses: sound, touch (warm pavement) and even the scent of rain. Some friends say they can't "smell" rain, but I can when it falls on city streets or grassy lawns. Such a delight! (Did you mean "pavement" instead of "payment"? I guess it could be taken either way as rain is a gift (or payment) from nature.) Love, Carolyn

Kacey Greenlee

Date: 6/20/2011 7:13:00 AM

I really enjoyed this.I also love the smell of rain.Great stuff....Have a great day love...

Cory Long

Date: 6/18/2011 4:52:00 PM

they do have an odd smell, nicely penned. cory