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rain days figured in

the line straight, turning the globe dark and then darker colors passing by the vivid stream, covering the sun from her indecency the day a dank, gray stare through the glass left over from the last hurricane maybe I should go outside and listen awhile But, I am worried. I'm goddamn sick the rain is costing me money

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Date: 2/18/2015 8:08:00 PM
You made me think..."me too"....nice realist/minimalist write....and thanks for the comment!....Peter
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Date: 2/17/2015 12:50:00 PM
Michael, I love your work - real poetry in motion - the flow, vivid imagery - brilliant! Definitely a "7"! Best wishes to you. Pandita
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