Rain and All

Wind, as her final rainstorm gathers,
gathers up the orphaned leaves
Leaves some tucked in between the rocks,
rocks some to sleep beneath the trees

Trees, moved so by her (rain and all)
all bow and though not known to cry, 
cry now, while silvered leaves of fall
fall as they watch their Zephyr die

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/23/2016 1:12:00 PM
This is wonderful and mesmerizing. I love every line. A definite 7 Lycia
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Date: 3/17/2016 3:07:00 PM
Great work Lycia, good luck in the contest
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Lycia Harding
Date: 3/25/2016 2:20:00 AM
Thank you, Mr Smith! xoxoxo
Date: 3/17/2016 1:45:00 PM
I wholeheartedly agree with the comments already made - Cleverly penned! My best regards to you, Lycia. :) john P.s A seven.
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Lycia Harding
Date: 3/25/2016 2:21:00 AM
Thank you, John! xoxoxo
Date: 3/17/2016 1:28:00 PM
Beautifully creative - I've never tried this style of poem Lycia good luck with the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lycia Harding
Date: 3/25/2016 2:18:00 AM
Hi Jan! Thank you. It was actually Nette Onclaud, I believe, who turned me on to this style but I've since run across it elsewhere. I think it's called a 'chain rhyme' but I'm not sure... Very fun and challenging!
Date: 3/17/2016 1:24:00 PM
Really really clever,...beautiful imagery, alliteration spot on, ..well done
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Lycia Harding
Date: 3/25/2016 2:17:00 AM
Thank you, Mark Anthony! xoxoxo
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