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Rain

The fact of losing you wasn't that much devastating. You evaporated too fast like water. And so it didn't give me affright. I know you're like water, you'll precipitate one day.  
 
And so, that one day came by destiny. I was in my room when it rained pieces of you. I went outside and felt the touch I've missed for somehow a long time. I enjoyed your every drop, the petrichor and the moist.  
 
I badly wanted you back. I longed for the water which drowns me in love. The water that gives me life every time I'm dehydrated. The water that forgives whoever I am. Only if I could collect all of your pieces and bring you back to my life forever, without you being gone once more. But I know, it will never happen.  
 
For now, I enjoy your unexpected visits and perchance sojourns. I relish your every coming. In that way, I still manage to have you, even though I know you have to evaporate again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/25/2016 3:34:00 PM
Awesome! What incredible imagery! A 7 and favorite for me! I enjoyed this poem very much! :)
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Date: 2/22/2016 3:39:00 PM
wow, this is really good writing from you!! I just love the metaphor here. FAVE
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Date: 2/22/2016 9:30:00 AM
Very beutiful love the relation of water to love!
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Date: 2/22/2016 8:58:00 AM
Excellent prose, Hansteven!! Rain and love intermix to provide a beautiful offering. #7+ Regards // paul
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Date: 2/22/2016 8:00:00 AM
Equating the rain with a lost love...so sad, and written so beautifully, Hansteven.
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