Rain

Run down the tears A weeping mother In absence of her son Sun Never ending sorrow

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Date: 6/21/2013 11:33:00 PM

Excellent. God's tears and mother's nature. Heartfelt write. Tfs

Date: 6/16/2013 11:49:00 AM

so heartfelt. What a lovely acrostic poem.

Date: 6/16/2013 6:26:00 AM

So filled with emotion. I can fill it as a walk in a dark forest. Love it my friend.

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 6/16/2013 10:27:00 AM

Thank You dearest Debby

Date: 6/15/2013 11:54:00 PM

Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed Tfs

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 6/16/2013 10:28:00 AM

Thank You Ravi

Date: 6/14/2013 8:19:00 PM

You are good at this form. Have a good night. Hugs Rick

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 6/16/2013 10:28:00 AM

Thank you Richard

Date: 6/14/2013 9:16:00 AM

Thank God for the tears of the mother nature, for without them no life would be! Wonderful Acrostic taking the way you meant it to be!

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 6/14/2013 11:41:00 AM

Thank you very much! This is my second Acrostic. did you read my woman one before this.