Rain

Run down the tears
A weeping  mother
In  absence of her son Sun 
Never ending  sorrow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/21/2013 11:33:00 PM
Excellent. God's tears and mother's nature. Heartfelt write. Tfs
Login to Reply
Date: 6/16/2013 11:49:00 AM
so heartfelt. What a lovely acrostic poem.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/16/2013 6:26:00 AM
So filled with emotion. I can fill it as a walk in a dark forest. Love it my friend.
Login to Reply
Gunatillake Avatar
Manel Gunatillake
Date: 6/16/2013 10:27:00 AM
Thank You dearest Debby
Date: 6/15/2013 11:54:00 PM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed Tfs
Login to Reply
Gunatillake Avatar
Manel Gunatillake
Date: 6/16/2013 10:28:00 AM
Thank You Ravi
Date: 6/14/2013 8:19:00 PM
You are good at this form. Have a good night. Hugs Rick
Login to Reply
Gunatillake Avatar
Manel Gunatillake
Date: 6/16/2013 10:28:00 AM
Thank you Richard
Date: 6/14/2013 9:16:00 AM
Thank God for the tears of the mother nature, for without them no life would be! Wonderful Acrostic taking the way you meant it to be!
Login to Reply
Gunatillake Avatar
Manel Gunatillake
Date: 6/14/2013 11:41:00 AM
Thank you very much! This is my second Acrostic. did you read my woman one before this.
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter