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The rain fell down fiercely today. Washed the trees and washed the birds, the cars that slowly passed by, And washed the red roofs of houses in town. It just couldn't wash away this sorrow, this inate, nevergone feeling of being alone. My lips move but what do they say? not a word from what runs within. And I always hoped that like salt the rain would melt it all away, releasing the heavy lid upon my chest. A naive expectation, A silly childish mistake. For I will die misunderstood, I'll surely die being betrayed, No doubt I'll die trying to mend my full of hope, broken, bleeding heart that 's been always as heavy as the rain that fell down today.

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Date: 11/28/2011 5:37:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Vivuane. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 11/27/2011 11:41:00 AM
wonderful write! ..Lori
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