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Rain

Rain is not an ordinary child. Rain is wild. As if wild is not enough Rain is tough. Her mother tucks her in with care, looks again, Rain’s not there. Her father roars, “You named her Rain, no wonder she is such a pain.” Her mother strikes back balefully. “You bully, why do you blame me? The child was marked by you as well. She thinks that all you do is yell.” Though Rain’s parents live in strife, her dad adores his spitfire wife. “I wish” he says, “She’d play with Breeze. When she’s with him I am at ease.” Her mother says, “I’ll zigzag down and look for her around the town. She’s been with Wind a lot of late, together trouble they create.” They roar and flash and then they see Rain playing in puddles peacefully. “Where have you been? By all the powers, we’ve looked for you for hours and hours”. Rain answers her parents with a smile. “I thought I’d just be gone a while. I went with Breeze a bit, to play. Wind came and we got carried away. Dad yells, but Mother shakes her head. “We’ve had a rough night. Let’s go to bed.” By: Joyce Johnson Fo Contest........ Rain, The Story Sponsored by Constance La France ~The Rambling Poet~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/14/2011 9:29:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Rain,The Story". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/13/2011 4:30:00 PM
hmmm, methinks her parents are Zues and one of his goddess wives? This was totally unique anf very fun to read, Joyce. A big congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/13/2011 1:27:00 PM
Amazing creativity, Joyce! Congratulations on your win in Constance's Contest! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/13/2011 12:10:00 PM
Oh, I love the comic and contemporary interpretation you took on this theme, Joyce. You had me laughing at the though of her parents wanting her to hang out with Breeze rather than Wind. Lot of symbolism mixed in this gem. Congratulations on your win, dear! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/13/2011 6:39:00 AM
Congratulationsn onn this well deserved win in the contest of Constance, Joyce
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Date: 1/13/2011 3:24:00 AM
just stunning, joyce.. beautifully woven tale!! cheers for bagging a great win in the contest!! : ) nette
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Date: 1/12/2011 9:18:00 PM
Many Congrats Joyce on big win with this imaginative verse.Best wishes/Luv - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 1/12/2011 8:38:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your amazing win in the Rain Story contest with this elegant entry my friend.. enjoy a well deserved top ten success with luv..
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Date: 1/12/2011 8:03:00 PM
So beautiful. Lots of congratulations for this win.
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Date: 1/1/2011 11:00:00 PM
a wonderful entry for the contest. great imagry. John H Loving III
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Date: 12/18/2010 3:02:00 PM
WOW! This is a winner. Make no mistake. This conversation could very well be carried on by Zeus and Hera. The Greeks loved this kind of invention. Love, Dave
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Date: 12/18/2010 9:05:00 AM
A wonderful story, Joyce! Totally enjoyed it! Going to my Favs. List! Good luck in the contest. Blessings, peace and joy this holy season! Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/17/2010 1:03:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Date: 12/17/2010 12:12:00 PM
a fresh, child-like piece that makes me smile...marvelous , joyce!! best winning wishes! huggs, nette
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Date: 12/17/2010 10:53:00 AM
What a delightful story, Joyce!! You made this a fun bedtime story for children!! Such fun to read....great job! Love Carrie
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Date: 12/17/2010 10:14:00 AM
Great imaginative write - enjoyed it-Liz
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Date: 12/17/2010 9:04:00 AM
This is a cute entry for the contest. You have done a terrific job in bringing into the mix Breeze and Wind. Loved it. Good luck.
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Date: 12/17/2010 9:01:00 AM
An excellent and exciting entry Joyce.. wonderful story of Rain... good luck in the new contest my friend.. my entry is "Rain Dance"... enjoy with luv..
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