Rain

The sky is crying tonight
It's tears fall down
Crashing into earth
The cold shards hit the ground
Drenching the world below
Bringing things to life
Letting earth breathe
The sky is done crying for now
So many beautiful things come from tears
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A   Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 2:15 AM
nice running into this poem again :)
Buggs Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 2:20 PM
Very good poem.Very vivid.Love,Jamecia
Cobb Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 12:39 PM
Enjoyed your poem. I loved the imagery of the rain and the tears. By the way, your name sounds familiar to me. Do you know anyone by the name of Wendy Childress. Just asking.
Palli Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 11:47 AM
nice vision of rain
A   Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 6:44 AM
well said, a perfect write, enjoyed,..p.d.
Mehta Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 6:30 AM
It's a good celebration of rain
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