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Rain

The sky is crying tonight It's tears fall down Crashing into earth The cold shards hit the ground Drenching the world below Bringing things to life Letting earth breathe The sky is done crying for now So many beautiful things come from tears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/20/2016 2:15:00 AM
nice running into this poem again :)
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Date: 10/1/2010 2:20:00 PM
Very good poem.Very vivid.Love,Jamecia
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Date: 5/23/2010 12:39:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem. I loved the imagery of the rain and the tears. By the way, your name sounds familiar to me. Do you know anyone by the name of Wendy Childress. Just asking.
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Date: 5/23/2010 11:47:00 AM
nice vision of rain
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Date: 5/23/2010 6:44:00 AM
well said, a perfect write, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 5/23/2010 6:30:00 AM
It's a good celebration of rain
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