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Copyright Protected, ID 08-1751-631-11
All Rights Reserved, 2025, Constance La France
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Written, August 11, 2025
For the International Contest, Bite Size Poem, No. 120
Sponsor, Line Gauthier, 08/19/2025

~ BEAUTIFUL ~

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Rain
falling
while sun shines.
Garden  . . .  glistens
with fragile raindrops pooling and dripping.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/12/2025 1:09:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your "rain" write. A story told in just a few words. We need rain here. Hot 110 to 125. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day writing away.............

Constance La France
Date: 8/14/2025 3:40:00 PM

Paula, thank you for the compliment, in Canada we measure by Celcius and it is 40 so I think that is about the same as you... we need rain too. We had a thunderstorm but it only lasted 10 minutes and then the blazing sun was back, Constance

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/11/2025 4:59:00 PM

I can see it! Nice one!

Constance La France
Date: 8/14/2025 3:41:00 PM

Kim, thank you for the compliment, Constance