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Take care with wet wishes -- there is a shortage of road sponges, then come the splashes rivers that overflow can carry away foolish rafters those who did not heed the sky, soaked, desperately needing dry be careful of wet kisses; the clouds they come out of -- debris they also carry can sorely tarry when thought is to settle-down and lovingly marry -- rain can clean, quench and grow kisses can comfort head-to-toe, can drench when overflow be thoughtful, restraint when making decisions -- we will all make mistakes but, long term, no benefits from wet brakes....

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Date: 7/5/2024 7:31:00 AM
wet wishes..wet kiss..wet brakes! Love it!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/5/2024 9:08:00 AM
Thank you, Kim; a bit preachy...but I'm a good listener as well. Blessings my friend. Hope you and your loved ones had a wonderful 4th!
Date: 7/3/2024 2:57:00 PM
A nicely written comparison of rain and relationship. It was a pleasure to read.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/3/2024 3:07:00 PM
Thank you, Hilda; blessings.
Date: 7/3/2024 2:23:00 PM
Interesting analogy, there is mercy in rain, but there is also negative aspects... it all depends on how we deal with it... clever poetry my friend..
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/3/2024 2:49:00 PM
Hi Si; yes, learn how to deal with -- it will fall regardless. Thank you, my friend.
Date: 7/3/2024 1:00:00 PM
rain can heal us wet hid us wound us and un-thirst us, so many many things, one thing I know for sure everyone loves to write poetry about rain. Love your poem Joe, maybe I'll try one about rain too lol
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/3/2024 2:05:00 PM
Hi Vie; thank you. This was written rather quickly, so I just changed a few words after a reread. I was reading a lot of poems on rain this morning -- a phrase popped into my head, and I just went with the inspiration for few more paragraphs. Other poets do inspire us. Great to have a talented community like Soup. Blessings my friend.
Date: 7/3/2024 11:03:00 AM
Hello Joe DiMino, These are good advise for all. My fav. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/4/2024 9:13:00 AM
Hello Joe DiMino, oh, you are welcome. Blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/3/2024 11:08:00 AM
Oh, thank you Darlene! You made my day. Blessings.
Date: 7/3/2024 10:36:00 AM
Yep.yep, I never did like lots of wet kisses . My home state is being flooded now by floods I hear. Not good at all!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/3/2024 11:07:00 AM
Hi Andrea; thank you. Weather patterns changing, the Sun is undergoing internal changes, has heated up slightly -- doesn't take much. Probably all normal. History says this occurs before a mini Ice Age. Very little to do with people breathing out CO2 and Cow farts, real science. CO2 means more vegetables and fresh oxygen. People are so misinformed. My uneducated opinion for what it is worth. Who knows?

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