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Rain

It’s an almighty responsibility to irrigate the land. Sending April showers when torrents are in demand. To control cloud bursts with symphonic precision. It takes all my skill and planning to make a decision. I rain for children to have fun, play and splash about. I send deluges of much needed water to eradicate drought. Glorious precipitation when ceased creates a vivid rainbow. Water to cleanse the cities and for flowers and crops to grow. When I rain in the Summer my glistening falls are well met. If I join the storm and signal its onslaught it’s grumbling I get. I especially like to rain crystal droplets where rivers are flowing. I rain over lakes keeping wildlife growing. I am special, its worth knowing.
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Date: 4/7/2024 9:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "Rain" write. Great Picture. Oh yes, April showers for May flowers... Have a blessed day writing away..........
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Date: 4/5/2024 4:30:00 PM
Wendy, well penned, congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 3/26/2024 11:45:00 PM
You did this one very well also, my friend.
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Date: 3/27/2024 5:08:00 AM
Thanks so Much Andrea, your comment is appreciated. Best wishes Wen
Date: 3/24/2024 11:03:00 AM
This is a wonderfully descriptive personification of rain dearest Wen. I love how rain justifies its existence and necessity. ‘ symphonic precision’’ vivid rainbow’ ‘ glistening falls ‘ and I really love,’ rain crystal droplets’. We all grumble when it rains but your lovely poem is a great reminder of why we should welcome rainfall. I really enjoyed the sights and sound of the rain here and your picture is beautiful too. Fingers crossed for you in the contest.
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Date: 3/24/2024 6:00:00 PM
aww Chris, you write such wondrous comments. Its so uplifting to read such lovely things about my poems. If it keeps up, you will have me believing that my poems are pretty good, but until then let me just say "thank you"
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Date: 3/24/2024 11:04:00 AM
I think you covered the subject in full poetic flow. Luv and hugs xx
Date: 3/23/2024 3:04:00 PM
A lovely personification, enhanced by colors of the rainbow and crystal droplets, along with other awesome sights and sounds. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/23/2024 4:24:00 PM
Thank you so much Evelyn. I really appreciate your lovely comment. Thank you.
Date: 3/23/2024 10:42:00 AM
You did very well with rain. I am drawn to sun and I have seen none yet done on sun. As soon as I finish comments, I need to start in on 4 contests I need to try This is one of them.
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Date: 3/23/2024 4:21:00 PM
Thanks dear friend. GL with yours I am sure it will be wonderful
Date: 3/23/2024 6:26:00 AM
Rain is indeed special, Very nice personification, I enjoyed the read
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Date: 3/23/2024 8:07:00 AM
Thanks very much Joeeph, I appreciate your thoughtful comment. Best wishes.
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