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Rain - Telangana

Rain Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Rodrigues Placed 6th _______________________________________________________ Upon the parched earth Gathered clouds poured down nonstop Boats on every road

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/31/2023 7:23:00 PM

"Boats on every road" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

Srinivas Veepuri
Date: 8/1/2023 10:39:00 AM

Alex, thank you for your visit and coment.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/31/2023 10:51:00 AM

Loved that final line! Interesting! Congratulations on your win in my contest, Srinivas!

Srinivas Veepuri
Date: 8/1/2023 10:38:00 AM

Kim, thank you for the placement.

Yann Rolland

Date: 7/29/2023 8:02:00 PM

nice pening, rain, yes, but not too much

Srinivas Veepuri
Date: 8/1/2023 10:42:00 AM

Yann, thank you for your compliment.