Raid

stealthy creeps the mist slips into minds shutting portals doors tempering flames extinguishing sparks silence

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Bill Baker

Date: 10/19/2022 10:50:00 AM

Roach killer? probably. :-) good one my witty friend, Gershon. Have a great day! Bill

Michael Tor

Date: 10/13/2022 7:00:00 PM

Two things came to mind right away. Bug spray killing bugs, hornets and the invasion of Donald Trumps Home. Thanks for shairng my friend...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/15/2022 8:45:00 PM

Ha, ha! Raid works against bugs. Not so well against Trump. I wish they'd raid the Clintons and Hunter Biden. Nah... Let's rather solve a few nasty little problems, such as inflation, inflation, and inflation. :) gw

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 10/13/2022 4:01:00 PM

Wow! Imagine that.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/15/2022 8:43:00 PM

I'd sure like to (imagine that). But I can't. Misplaced my imagination a while ago, and hasn't turned up yet. ~ Losing My Mind Slowly...

Sand Blown

Date: 10/13/2022 1:48:00 PM

...raid?!....screamed the squitters.....nice meta-force poem.....stans sand

John Lawless

Date: 10/13/2022 5:28:00 AM

I wonder that's what they shouted at Mar a Largo.....RAID'S HERE!!!

Jeff Kyser

Date: 10/12/2022 9:50:00 PM

Mrs. Mister missed her sister. Mister’s sister missed her mitts. Sister’s mitts were prone to blister. So she loaned them to hermits. (Sorry, mist, erm, musta slipped into my mind)

Becky Forbes

Date: 10/12/2022 8:01:00 PM

I think this is my favorite of your creations (that I've read since joining this soupy family) :-)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/12/2022 8:22:00 PM

Thank you so much, Becky. Really appreciate you telling me this... I used to write these more frequently. Kinda got away from it for a while... Peace, gw