Raid

stealthy
  creeps the mist
  slips into
  minds
  shutting portals
  doors
  tempering flames
  extinguishing sparks
  silence
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Baker Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 10:50 AM
Roach killer? probably. :-) good one my witty friend, Gershon. Have a great day! Bill
Tor Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 7:00 PM
Two things came to mind right away. Bug spray killing bugs, hornets and the invasion of Donald Trumps Home. Thanks for shairng my friend...
Wolf Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 8:45 PM
Ha, ha! Raid works against bugs. Not so well against Trump. I wish they'd raid the Clintons and Hunter Biden. Nah... Let's rather solve a few nasty little problems, such as inflation, inflation, and inflation. :) gw
Hawkins Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 4:01 PM
Wow! Imagine that.
Wolf Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 8:43 PM
I'd sure like to (imagine that). But I can't. Misplaced my imagination a while ago, and hasn't turned up yet. ~ Losing My Mind Slowly...
Blown Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 1:48 PM
...raid?!....screamed the squitters.....nice meta-force poem.....stans sand
Lawless Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 5:28 AM
I wonder that's what they shouted at Mar a Largo.....RAID'S HERE!!!
Kyser Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 9:50 PM
Mrs. Mister missed her sister. Mister’s sister missed her mitts. Sister’s mitts were prone to blister. So she loaned them to hermits. (Sorry, mist, erm, musta slipped into my mind)
Forbes Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 8:01 PM
I think this is my favorite of your creations (that I've read since joining this soupy family) :-)
Wolf Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 8:22 PM
Thank you so much, Becky. Really appreciate you telling me this... I used to write these more frequently. Kinda got away from it for a while... Peace, gw
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