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Rags

she lay upon the cloud tops ignorant of her rags on her back loose feathers stuffed into a sack because she shined with silver he thought she could fly but those who are born soaring never needed to try suits, boots, life impaired self-contained in a paper bag he begs for her to love him burning with a desire ferocious as a tiger caged in glass imprisoned within his fear the heart won't let her near

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Date: 4/5/2018 8:59:00 PM
Hello, Frederick! "but those who are born soaring never needed to try" Hard hitting lines, as well as the last line. It is true - our fears can truly imprison us. Well done. Always, Laura
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Date: 1/23/2018 1:56:00 PM
Hello Frederick :) - It is a great pleasure to welcome you and thank you for your first contribution here on Poerty Soup - hugs // Sun :)
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Date: 1/22/2018 2:24:00 PM
Damn Frederick this is a hard htting poem, instead of 'I do not know', you can use free verse... you can edit this in the my poem section.. Welcome to poetry soup..
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Date: 1/22/2018 10:58:00 AM
Frederick, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this marvelous community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I TOO am ready to enjoy and follow you and your poetry if you'd like :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup 2018 :) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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