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Raging Winds

raging winds
deafening thunder....
dead telephone



© kashinath karmakar (29th June 2011)
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Placement: 1st ;(July 2011)

Contest:Pseudo-Haiku-Cuckoo-Cuckhosis!

Sponsor:Chris D. Aechtner

Copyright © Kash Poet | Year Posted 2011

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Rachelle S. Date: 7/15/2011 12:53:00 PM nice poem, short and beautiful :) Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 7/7/2011 3:11:00 PM Now - that is what I call an awesome Haiku, Kash.Many congrats on your FIRST PLACE WIN. Lainie Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/7/2011 7:06:00 AM Just had to stop by today and thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Kashinath. I will be back soon to read more of your poetry. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 7/5/2011 7:06:00 AM Love this winner!! Now this is true haiku, and so unique!! Hooray for you, Kashinath!! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/5/2011 4:41:00 AM Congratulations on your win Kashinath in Chris's "Pseudo-Haiku" contest. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Afroze Ali Date: 7/5/2011 3:11:00 AM I almost laughed on reading this. congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 7/4/2011 3:10:00 PM lol not sure if it's a haiku or a senryu but since it's very funny I think the later and it is still most excellent ;) Congrad's on your win Light & Love Login to Reply

Vivek Deshpande Date: 7/4/2011 1:27:00 AM congratulations on your 1st place win..........! Login to Reply

Black Eyed Susan Date: 7/3/2011 7:02:00 PM Congratulations on your 1st place win! I like the dangerous element it implies. Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 7/3/2011 8:47:00 AM Way to go for you, Kashinath! That is soo cool how you are the first male to win Chris' contest :) I really liked this unique and suspenseful haiku :) Super congrats to you ^_^ Login to Reply

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 7/3/2011 8:23:00 AM congrats on your well-deserved 1st place win! this is an unusual one and I like the dry humour :-) Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 7/3/2011 6:30:00 AM Congrats on this amazing win and write.....Michael Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 7/3/2011 6:10:00 AM Wow! What a great haiku, Kash. So happy to see you win first place. Join me in the dance of joy! Congratulations. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Diane Locksley Date: 7/3/2011 6:07:00 AM Very, very good, Kashinath! Congratulations on taking first place. Best to you, Diane Login to Reply

Jun-Jun Villanueva Date: 7/3/2011 2:48:00 AM real big WIN....CONGRATULATIONS! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/2/2011 9:43:00 PM WAY TO GO, KASH, you broke the gender barrier. hahahaha. (that sounds kind of weird) Anyway, ENJOY your victory. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/2/2011 7:52:00 PM congrats Kash on your super duper first place ..wow raging winds took top spot luv..wow.. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 7/2/2011 6:14:00 PM My congratulations on the first place win in the contest, kashinath Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/2/2011 5:18:00 PM Congrats on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/30/2011 9:59:00 PM Kash, in a small way,your style here like how i did my haiku too! the way you took two things and related them. I hope it does well in the contest.It will be fun for me to see the winners in that one that I missed out on. thanks also for revisiting so many of my poems today. You are such a good friend . LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/30/2011 3:49:00 PM oh so true in some of our thunderstorms here too Kash.. elegant visuals with the raging winds luv.. good luck in the contest by Chris.. Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 6/29/2011 9:50:00 PM hey there again Kashinath ;)-- thanks for dropping by my haiku-- I entered the velvet sky one-- as for that thing with the word "drip" - yeah I did copy/paste although you can actually do it straight on the post poem page? just use the space bar to move the words where you want them to be; most of the time it works for me ;) hope this helps :D Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/29/2011 1:22:00 PM It happened twice in this month here too, kashinath. I can relate to that for India. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/29/2011 12:37:00 PM I positively enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Kashinath. I hope to be back again tomorrow to read some more. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 6/29/2011 9:44:00 AM Really like how that last line shows so much suspense, Kashinath! Really enjoyed this one, sort of reminds me of a suspense thriller ;) Wish you the best in Chris' contest :D Login to Reply

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