Raging Storm

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When the storm raged, I stood by the river. Neptunian furrows bloom when I frown. Navy blue lightning struck my brow, shiver. When the storm raged, I stood by the river. Striving to crook and praise the sky silver. The wind is blowing then the tide will sound. When the storm raged, I stood by the river. Neptunian furrows bloom when I frown. Written: March 12, 2023

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/13/2023 12:41:00 PM

I like your triolet. They are not so easy to write but you have done well. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my pages with comments. Sara

Frances Schiavina

Date: 3/13/2023 7:56:00 AM

Very beautiful poem with hidden meaning of staying by the river and taking its beating flowing with the energy of life.

Valsa George

Date: 3/12/2023 10:02:00 PM

Beautiful and enticing scene ! Gorgeous images too. Lovely triolet, dear Lasaad

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/12/2023 1:18:00 PM

Neptunian imagery that only your pen could pay justice to, my dearest friend, Lasaad! Be blessed!

Jim Slaughter

Date: 3/12/2023 11:39:00 AM

This piece is very enigmatic, S S...just like the rock sculpture in the picture. I can only imagine what "Neptunian furrows" must be like.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/12/2023 11:19:00 AM

'Navy blue lightning struck my brow, shiver.' Gorgeous images, Lasaad. This is a fave. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/12/2023 8:00:00 AM

- Beautifully described, Las :) - hugs