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Raging Moon

Homecoming under the moon devoid of pain. When did the clock turned back ? You are becoming a child. My journey opens in a dark wound. A promise to walk blindfolded, when only the footfalls are audible. The distance between the homes was increasing. Your own shadow becomes a stranger: mystery of defining the life. Living among cannibals, aides ready to drag your carcass unfolding your truth falling in dust. Satish Verma

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/30/2009 8:45:00 AM
This is very existential. As inward as the child is, the child inside you is not dead. Listen to Enigma's song, "Return to Innocence"- you can only accept love as that child. -Sara
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Date: 12/30/2009 5:30:00 AM
Interesting question in first stanza third line. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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