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Raging Brillance

Ambiance brilliant
   tumult strikes earth from heaven -
       Thunderheads rage on. 


7th place in the "Haiku You" contest by Rick Parise.

A. Green

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Brandee Augustus

June 10, 2010 at 12:36 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the "Haiku You" contest!

Andrea Dietrich

June 5, 2010 at 9:14 PM

just now getting to see THESE winners. you did so well. Congratulations. Luv, andrea

Gert W. Knop

June 3, 2010 at 6:20 AM

Congrats on your success in the contest with this fine Haiku, Amy! Have a great time and thank you for your kind comments...Gert

Carolyn Devonshire

June 2, 2010 at 6:04 PM

Beautiful haiku, Amy! Congratulations on your success in Rick's contest. Love, Carolyn

Mac Mcgovern

June 2, 2010 at 3:48 PM

You write the best haiku and make it look easy. I am always captivated by your choice and use of the vocabulary in making your work unique. Thanks for sharing and allowing me the opportunity to experience Raging Brilliance.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 2, 2010 at 3:31 PM

Great job Amy ..congrats on your win in the Haiku You contest... enjoy .. my entry did not make it this time... so please have a victory dance for me.. luv.. from the "Sweetheart"

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

June 1, 2010 at 9:28 PM

Dear Amy, Brilliant Haiku Best of Luck in the Contest and Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment on my POEM "Red Belly Woodpecker" I must say YOU Ladies are quick on making Comments YOUR Comment came in 3 minutes after I wrote it. Carrie Richard Commented on my POEM " Flaming Baked Alaska " in less than a minute How can YOU be that fast it takes me a least 5 minutes to write a short comment YOUR Liege ALWAYS... HG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 1, 2010 at 7:34 PM

I so luv this title I meant to tell u twice before... good luck again... awesome feel to its wording.. luv.. "Sweetheart"

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 1, 2010 at 7:33 PM

Laser eye surgery .. it had to be done as three years ago I had cataract durgery in both eyes ..and I was kinda young for that but was having problems... now scar tissues surface on each eye so laser surgery needed .. other eye next week.. right now it feels like a monkey is in there trying to get out and I really want him out and free but another day of this doc said... I used the Italina Sonnet example under poetry forms... to guide me ..now working on Deb's contest entry.. this is a blast luv

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 1, 2010 at 6:02 PM

Awesome Amy at it again.. good luck my friend .. thankxxx darlin' for your terrific comments .. feel like one eyed jack right now from my eye surgery this morning... other one next week but its all good ..so maybe I can see again..clear..focus.. so important for a writer..u think??? haha.. luv.. must say your contest was so special to me to enter... luv those four legged creatures .. more than my "honey poo"..haha.. uv..Linda-Marie..