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Raging

My heart is raging…. I’m raging, churning, foaming Driven WILD... Incensed, appalled, angered Filled with BILE I’m savage, delirious, raving Mad Barbaric, feral, tempestuous BAD I’m tossing, storming, brewing About to pound Crashing, smashing, demolishing Declared Unsound I’m rampageous, furious, livid Untamed I’ll batter, break, uproot And upbraid I'll take you, shake you, hound you Demand Seize you, posses you, undress you Command Unleashed, unchained, unbroken Free Beware, take care, watch out… FOR ME! Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Lynn Glover

Date: 9/25/2013 9:34:00 PM

I enjoyed your poem imminently and look forward to reading more of your work. Very good.

Richard D Seal

Date: 9/18/2013 5:11:00 PM

Taking a walk on the wild side are yer, yes go on let it all out lol, you'll feel better. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/22/2013 8:06:00 AM

Mr Seal...thank you or your permission to let it all out...I'm gratified that you do not find this abhorring...Desert Orchid thanks you!

Heather Ober

Date: 9/17/2013 10:55:00 AM

I felt my heart racing while reading this one!! Sheesh, lady! You sure know how to suck us into your poetry :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/17/2013 1:06:00 PM

I've missed you, cutie pie! Hope all is well! Heard you been busy...WELCOME BACK! Glad you liked it....Hugs

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/16/2013 8:53:00 PM

EXCELLENT PIECE PARTING THE WAVES UNLEASHED A STORM BEAUTIFULLY PENNED

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/17/2013 1:07:00 PM

Liam....thank you. :) You are kind.....

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/16/2013 2:06:00 PM

Well Well.I like this side raging side of you ... Eileen, I'm already keeping my eyes open. I don't know what I'm like when I'm raging up a storm. This is very poetic. I wonder what was running through your mind when you wrote this.... thank you for caring and giving out the ending warning... and still you are a sweetheart... xox~ LINDA

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/17/2013 1:09:00 PM

HA HA HA HA HA!!!! Yes....only my family has seen this side of me...and those VERY close to me. I can get get rather tempestuous...My nature....Extremes in everything...Oh well....the warning's been given...I won't be hard on you, PD! ;)

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/16/2013 12:19:00 PM

What is raging it's clear today for me. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem on raging. Loved always, bl

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/16/2013 12:40:00 PM

Thanks, BL....Glad you enjoyed this....

Poet Tacito

Date: 9/16/2013 8:55:00 AM

This is the calmest thing you've ever posted. ;-) LOVE THIS AWESOMENESS!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/16/2013 12:39:00 PM

Oh Drake...the calmest, eh? Hmmmmmmmmm.....that winky face will save ya, my dear.....AWESOMENESS....OH WOW!!!!!!!!!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/16/2013 7:39:00 AM

You sound like a raging ocean.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/17/2013 4:57:00 PM

;0)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/17/2013 1:10:00 PM

Now...was that so hard to write? Thanks, Richard....Clarity is always nice.... :) Now you've made me S M I L E!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/17/2013 7:12:00 AM

As I am a big fan of water and the Ocean that would be a good thing. Your power is evidenced in all your work.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/16/2013 12:36:00 PM

True...That was my intention...Can not tell from your post whether that is a good or bad thing?

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/16/2013 5:57:00 AM

- Wooow, Eileen ... well written, bravo. - Have a nice week, in love and peace! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/16/2013 12:36:00 PM

Thanks, my ray of sunshine! Yes..back to work soon...the vacation has ended. HUGS!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/16/2013 5:20:00 AM

What dynamism, what eruption, what manifestation of spirit and talent and inspiration! What an explosion of beauty! Bravo! 7! Thank you for sharing!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/16/2013 12:35:00 PM

Ti oraia enai afto!!! Efkharisto! :) Thank you, my dear esteemed poet, for this lovely post and words of affirmation. I am thrilled!!! :)