Eileen Manassian Poet Rhyme

Raging

My heart is raging….

I’m raging, churning, foaming
Driven WILD...
Incensed, appalled, angered
Filled with BILE

I’m savage, delirious, raving
Mad
Barbaric, feral, tempestuous
BAD

I’m tossing, storming, brewing
About to pound
Crashing, smashing, demolishing
Declared Unsound

I’m rampageous, furious, livid
Untamed
I’ll batter, break, uproot
And upbraid

I'll take you, shake you, hound you
Demand
Seize you, posses you, undress you
Command

Unleashed, unchained, unbroken
Free
Beware, take care, watch out…
FOR ME!

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Lynn Glover September 25, 2013 at 9:34 PM I enjoyed your poem imminently and look forward to reading more of your work. Very good.

Richard D Seal September 18, 2013 at 5:11 PM Taking a walk on the wild side are yer, yes go on let it all out lol, you'll feel better. Take care, Richard Eileen Manassian September 22, 2013 at 8:06 AM Mr Seal...thank you or your permission to let it all out...I'm gratified that you do not find this abhorring...Desert Orchid thanks you!

Heather Ober September 17, 2013 at 10:55 AM I felt my heart racing while reading this one!! Sheesh, lady! You sure know how to suck us into your poetry :) Eileen Manassian September 17, 2013 at 1:06 PM I've missed you, cutie pie! Hope all is well! Heard you been busy...WELCOME BACK! Glad you liked it....Hugs

Liam Mcdaid September 16, 2013 at 8:53 PM EXCELLENT PIECE PARTING THE WAVES UNLEASHED A STORM BEAUTIFULLY PENNED Eileen Manassian September 17, 2013 at 1:07 PM Liam....thank you. :) You are kind.....

Poet Destroyer A September 16, 2013 at 2:06 PM Well Well.I like this side raging side of you ... Eileen, I'm already keeping my eyes open. I don't know what I'm like when I'm raging up a storm. This is very poetic. I wonder what was running through your mind when you wrote this.... thank you for caring and giving out the ending warning... and still you are a sweetheart... xox~ LINDA Eileen Manassian September 17, 2013 at 1:09 PM HA HA HA HA HA!!!! Yes....only my family has seen this side of me...and those VERY close to me. I can get get rather tempestuous...My nature....Extremes in everything...Oh well....the warning's been given...I won't be hard on you, PD! ;)

Bl Devnath September 16, 2013 at 12:19 PM What is raging it's clear today for me. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem on raging. Loved always, bl Eileen Manassian September 16, 2013 at 12:40 PM Thanks, BL....Glad you enjoyed this....

Poet Tacito September 16, 2013 at 8:55 AM This is the calmest thing you've ever posted. ;-) LOVE THIS AWESOMENESS! Eileen Manassian September 16, 2013 at 12:39 PM Oh Drake...the calmest, eh? Hmmmmmmmmm.....that winky face will save ya, my dear.....AWESOMENESS....OH WOW!!!!!!!!!!

Richard Lamoureux September 16, 2013 at 7:39 AM You sound like a raging ocean. Richard Lamoureux September 17, 2013 at 4:57 PM ;0) Eileen Manassian September 17, 2013 at 1:10 PM Now...was that so hard to write? Thanks, Richard....Clarity is always nice.... :) Now you've made me S M I L E! Richard Lamoureux September 17, 2013 at 7:12 AM As I am a big fan of water and the Ocean that would be a good thing. Your power is evidenced in all your work. Eileen Manassian September 16, 2013 at 12:36 PM True...That was my intention...Can not tell from your post whether that is a good or bad thing?

Anne-Lise Andresen September 16, 2013 at 5:57 AM - Wooow, Eileen ... well written, bravo. - Have a nice week, in love and peace! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Eileen Manassian September 16, 2013 at 12:36 PM Thanks, my ray of sunshine! Yes..back to work soon...the vacation has ended. HUGS!

Demetrios Trifiatis September 16, 2013 at 5:20 AM What dynamism, what eruption, what manifestation of spirit and talent and inspiration! What an explosion of beauty! Bravo! 7! Thank you for sharing! Eileen Manassian September 16, 2013 at 12:35 PM Ti oraia enai afto!!! Efkharisto! :) Thank you, my dear esteemed poet, for this lovely post and words of affirmation. I am thrilled!!! :)