Rage 1

Did I pull the trigger that killed your Brother, or Did I drop that bomb that took your Mother I do not know then why you hate me?? Is it because he is of my kin, or Is it because he reads the same text as me, I do not know what text he reads The one i have is very clear and straight The one i read forbade killing The one i read have clear meaning The one i read speak of a day that is coming The one which state that just is our king Thus i wait with faith for that very day To see him judge our common enemy.....

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Skat A

Date: 2/26/2016 10:03:00 PM

R. Newaz, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/23/2016 7:05:00 AM

- Welcome with your first poems here on PoetrySoup, Reashat - PoetrySoup is simply the world's best :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

R. Newaz
Date: 2/23/2016 12:14:00 PM

Thank You...will appreciate your feedback.

Diet Water

Date: 2/22/2016 9:04:00 AM

Goose fraba man calm down

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/22/2016 7:38:00 AM

Reashat, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

R. Newaz
Date: 2/22/2016 11:30:00 AM

Thank you and would appreciate your feedback