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let us face it we are impacted when love is betrayed soul’s light is subtracted we live in an imperfect world burning with sin and rage love’s flag not unfurled till we come of age

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Date: 8/1/2023 12:04:00 PM
....yessireee....hour-rage tears tears..... and our-age knows better.....stan
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Date: 8/1/2023 7:56:00 PM
from the beginning of recorded history till today, as a collective, we remain where we were, with our heart centre not awakened, as it so appears
Date: 8/1/2023 10:03:00 AM
I enjoyed your write. Love your line, "we live in an imperfect world." So very true. Have a great day.............
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Date: 8/1/2023 7:52:00 PM
and if the world is but crystallised thought in motion, with desire preceding thought, it’s time for introspection
Date: 8/1/2023 1:49:00 AM
lovely write enjoyed reading your work.
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Date: 8/1/2023 1:57:00 AM
Thank you, Yolanda

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