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Rag Doll

mentally battered limp and torn, stuffing ripped out - self esteem gone, verbally punched my spirit is low, I.ll stitch myself together and find a new home.

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Roger Page

Date: 6/17/2010 1:20:00 PM

Love it. Hope you are not the doll Rog x

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/23/2010 2:11:00 PM

oh but it sounds like a very well loved rag doll. Thanks for commenting on my entry. I'm not telling but I am much older than you are, at seventy you should still be skipping and running. Love, Joyce

Winston Q Niles

Date: 12/7/2009 12:32:00 PM

Understand where you're coming from. Nice read

Daver Austin

Date: 12/5/2009 8:43:00 AM

Charming write, Barb. Let's hear more from you and soon. Love, Daver

Sue Mason

Date: 9/23/2009 9:24:00 AM

Well, we hope you find one here at PoetrySoup, Barbara ... smile ... excellent writing !!

Autumn Page

Date: 9/21/2009 5:20:00 PM

interesting. i like it. Autumn

James Fraser

Date: 8/29/2009 12:39:00 PM

Delightful narrative Barbara, i bet there are many rag dolls out there needing this, lovely read. Thank you for sharing>>James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2009 12:14:00 PM

External and internal scarring will need to be repaired. I can just see this rag doll. Topic that needs to be talked about knowledge is importatnt. The more we know the better we can help prevent these happening. Keep writing. Sara