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Written for the Alphabet Soup contest sponsored by Joseph May

Radioactive Stars

As Balmy Comets Dazzle, Exhaling Fragranced Gold; Haloed In Jasmine Kisses~ Lyrical Moon Nimbly Orchestrates Peace, Quenching Radioactive Stars, To Unwed Vain Woes; Xylophones Yield Zephyrs.
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Kerr Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 8:48 AM
Your giftedness is so much to the fore with this in my estimation extremely tricky form. You have sustained the flow, rhythm, and scintallating imagery of this hue-infused divine work. Ink, you are a wondrous wordsmith.🔥🔥🔥 Light and warmth Howard
May Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 6:10 AM
Congrats on your win, Very nicely penned
mysore Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 11:07 PM
so smooth. lovely write. congratulations dear poet, cheers!!!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 8:36 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/lovely write again. Have a blessed day with your win as you write away..................
Dietrich Avatar
January 26, 2025 at 10:30 AM
Seeing this one again. . wonder when it will get judged.
Kauffman Avatar
January 23, 2025 at 1:15 PM
Just delightful dear Inky! Words wait to do your bidding in striking images and totally unique perspectives in the themes you choose! This contest turned out to be more challenging than I thought and I missed the deadline but after reading this ABC poem I know yours is a poetic masterpiece! Blessings of stars to you dear friend! Samzy ~
George Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 9:59 PM
I found this contest so challenging and had almost given up. But when I saw many doing it with much ease, I just made a final try, but not to my satisfaction. You, a gifted Wordsmith have met the challenge in a masterful way. I am not surprised at all, dear friend. All the Best.,
Beaufort Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 1:22 PM
IE, I love that you write for contests at times. This is an interesting one and your composition brings a smile to my core. You've made a compact and wonderful universe with this one.
Onclaud Avatar
January 19, 2025 at 7:01 PM
This is a lovely picture glazed with impeccable impressions, ink...stunning work!
Buehler Avatar
January 18, 2025 at 5:24 PM
'As Balmy Comets Dazzle, Exhaling Fragranced Gold,' is one example of why I find this poem to be so very lovely. It's a fave for me. Best wishes for the contest. :)
One Avatar
January 18, 2025 at 10:31 AM
ABC, as easy as 123.... another form you have mastered so well.. this shows the power of you vocabulary and your chosen words are so good and it flows so well.. All the best in the contest..
Onpaper Avatar
January 18, 2025 at 12:45 AM
As Balmy Comets Dazzle, ooooo the imagary!!! Exhaling Fragranced Gold.. freaking sexaaay!!!! Haloed In Jasmine Kisses… ooo Lyrical Moon Nimbly oooo my my !!! Quenching Radioactive Stars, the kind of excitement this piece is bringing is unspeakable aeeee !!! Stunning!!! I duno this form but you have done an outstanding weave papi!!
Empress Avatar
January 18, 2025 at 1:06 AM
Hahah sure papi you da best biased ever
Hind Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 1:58 PM
Very lovely, Ink - this looks like a difficult form, but you nailed it <3
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 11:47 PM
It isnt that difficult just hard to flow dear paige: thank you for your kind comment
Goldsmith Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 12:03 PM
WOW!!! What a creative write. You painted a wonderful picture with your words. I found this one to be a hard one to write but you make it look so very easy. "Good Luck" Have a fun day as you write away..................
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 11:45 PM
Awwn thats so sweet dear paula, so kind of you to say, i will now go read your take too; sending you light always
Bell Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 11:49 AM
A braw cosmos diamond engaging facade imaginative juxtaposition kickass LMNO, poem. You deserve to win that contest. lol
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 11:44 PM
Lol this comment made me laugh: its a very inspiring prompt. You should maybe give it a go: winning~ im not sure about that but i enjoyed this brain exercise. Thank you so much dear paul
Liguori Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 11:05 AM
I love your poem about the cosmos. It brings me to a space of happiness. I always enjoy your writes. ABC form is hard but you nailed it. Cheers.
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 11:39 PM
Thats a very kind thing to say and yes ABC is very hard to flow, can weave words together no problem, but flowing was hard. Thank you for your kind and generous comment
Meadows Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 11:00 AM
Beautifully written.
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 11:36 PM
Thank you kindly for your visit and comment, appreciate your support
Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 9:29 AM
oooh, really cool one, Sweetie. I like that it all goes together cohesively and is not just phrases that are not put together in a careful stream of words. I finally did mine. Not perfection, but it will have to do because that contest is filling up fast!
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 11:17 PM
I loved yours! Its perfect definitely! Flows so well and such a beautiful approach you took! Thank you for liking and leaving your thoughts on mine too/ always grateful
Poet Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 8:02 AM
Dearest, Ink Your ABC poem is incredibly metaphor-rich, beautifully structured, and bursting with cosmic deliciousness. That seemed like a breeze compared to what you accomplished. Good luck in the contest! Sending you good vibes and warm hugs
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 11:16 PM
Thank you so very much dear dr sotto, so kind of you! I love that " metaphor-rich" if metaphors were a currency maybe ill be a millionaire ah. Appreciate your kindness
Cunningham Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 2:31 AM
Well composed IE, that was no easy task, you make it look so easy, best of luck in the contest and have a lovely weekend.. Tom
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 4:27 AM
Thank you so much for your thoughtful and kind comment dear tom, so grateful always for your unwavering support. Was easy the first part, as i woke up with those lines and then x y z was a bit hard as i kept wanting to change them. Would love to see you do this form too: sending you light always
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 1:14 AM
- Excellent done, Ink :) - "Radioactive Stars" ... sounds a bit scary - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 4:20 AM
Awn thank you dear anne lise, they are bit intense but quenched by moons balmy melody haha. Appreciate your kindness
Rhymes Avatar
January 16, 2025 at 11:29 PM
Beautiful
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 4:15 AM
Awn thank you dahlin
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