Radiant Fourth of July

multicolored sparks
dwindling across the unfilled sky...
bright smoke you ignite







©RashanaKing2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Brown Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 8:25 AM
Congratulations Rashana on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Fireworks". Love, Carol
K. Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 1:26 AM
congrats Rashana with your win with this radiant haiku :) --nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 1:37 PM
Congratulations, Rashana!
George   Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 8:57 AM
ovely Haiky, Rashana. congratulations on your win. Lainie
Sweetheart Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 6:34 PM
Congrats Rashana on your winning Haiku in the Fireworks contest with this wonderful write and win.. enjoy as u celebrate the 4th in style.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA...
 Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 4:24 PM
Nice use of imagery for an interesting perspecitve. Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Enjoy your honor. I wish you many more. Karen
Rich Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 1:32 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today.. I'm new to the soup so I hope you have an open mind as far as poetry. Enjoy ya day.
Mehta Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 7:02 PM
A wonderful entry to the contest. Good luck
A   Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 6:04 PM
lovely description on a beautiful display,, enjoyed...P.D.
Kendrick Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 4:50 PM
Interesting fireworks write..Sara
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace