Racy Kissable Beau

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                                         Rapture amour's acknowledgment
                                               Lovers' passion's accipient
                                         Romance rendezous' achievement
                                                       My inamorato
                                            Our risque love incandescent
                                                   Racy kissable beau



Contest:Rime Couee'
Sponsor:Dr. Ram Mehta
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Ross Jr. Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 9:20 AM
sensous, mysterious, alluring. Bravo, wonderful poem, I Like it very much! Thanks for your kind comments on Warm Hearts, appreciated much. Bless you!
Taylor Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 12:15 PM
Oh my god! I'm glad I read this. I'm jealous of your skills on this one. You are so gifted my poetic friend. Was this just for a contest or inspired by some lucky guy? Either way, this piece has me smitten by you now so marry me. right now. Marry me! lol. Assuming P.D. turns down my proposal....lol at least think about it for now. I may have asked you before lol. Still, amazing piece. Truly something for all writers to aspire to.
Fraser Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 3:43 PM
Simply terrific Sara. Most definitely top of the class with this piece. Good luck in the contest, it sure deserves to be up there :)
Austin Avatar
July 4, 2011 at 1:11 PM
Million dollar words for a million dollar beau. Good luck in the contest. LOve, daver
Foulk Avatar
July 4, 2011 at 11:19 AM
a great write. thank you for commenting on The Silence of a Falling Star.
Dietrich Avatar
July 4, 2011 at 1:02 AM
WHat great words you used, Sara. Very cute last line. And now I am OUTTA here. have a GREAT fourth of July.
Johnson Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 10:58 PM
amours rapture like the deep, exhausting must you go to sleep. capture. great words babe, xo, Don
Sumler Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 6:38 PM
Beautiful title and a magnificent title Sara. Good luck to you with this creative, artistic gem!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 3:33 PM
wonderful words of passion and delight Sara.. good luck in the contest with this brand new form luv..happy 4th celebrations...
Culverhouse Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 3:22 PM
Who's your beau?? I think I saw him running down the road. Trying to hide. hehe. ......yes I did read your poems!!
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