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Race with the Light

abstract images fracture her brain shards of a life review kaleidoscope dodge the pain they carry concentrate on present memories weave waves relentlessly raging “against the dying of the light” ends in time today, race with the light overpowering faith pulsates stimulates energy pours through veins her final resolve welcome every shining day
*Entry for Brian's 1-14 Max contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/7/2011 1:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Any Poem You Posted this Week"contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/6/2011 8:37:00 AM
Congrats, Carolyn. Excellent write. Nice going. Best to you and yours. luv Ralph
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Date: 11/6/2011 8:30:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Carolyn, Congratulations on this second in command and many wishes for many success in the future. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/5/2011 8:44:00 PM
Congratulation for win. Thanks, bl
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Date: 11/5/2011 6:04:00 PM
This is a RACE WINNER! Great Winning Poem! You always come with the strength in your lines!
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Date: 11/5/2011 3:34:00 PM
It's a hit AGAIN!! Love the theme of living for today...the present...not looking back like Lot's wife...not worrying about tomorrow or what we will wear...I love how the Lord has it all in His hand. Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 11/5/2011 12:55:00 PM
EXCELLENT, AWESOM..all the "write" stuff. Rosalyn
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Date: 11/5/2011 8:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in PD's contest Carolyn
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Date: 11/3/2011 7:33:00 AM
Small in form but big big in theme and presentation.Well penned,Carolyn.Congratulations on your great win! luv FAB
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Date: 11/3/2011 12:50:00 AM
Congratulations on the win with this lovely poem, Carolyn
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Date: 11/2/2011 11:22:00 PM
This is fantastic, Carolyn. Glad it was 1st...inspiring writes should always win in my book. Luv, Gwendolen
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Date: 11/2/2011 5:11:00 PM
Lovely day for you so sweet, pain free loving kind of sleep, always...keep...
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Date: 11/2/2011 3:07:00 PM
Great write on the effects of light Carolyn many good wishes in the contest..
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Date: 11/2/2011 12:22:00 PM
Congrats on a great write......George
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Date: 11/2/2011 8:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place in Brian's contest Carolyn
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Date: 11/2/2011 5:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "1-14 any theme" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/31/2011 3:45:00 PM
love it....you must have been sending me telepathy.....that same line has been going through my brain and I was trying to think of a poem to explain my life.
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Date: 10/31/2011 10:07:00 AM
Beautiful write on acceptance, my friend. I suppose literally joie de vivre
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Date: 10/31/2011 12:18:00 AM
This poem speaks to me a sense of acceptance of something that cannot be changed except the moments one is given. Gorgeous view from here. Love it, Carolyn.....Did u need to borrow a casserole pan for your dish? lol....Good luck. Hope u like the way we set up the contest. Tried to be different. Love, Gwen...I am welcoming this shining day at 2am...gettin a big head start!!
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Date: 10/30/2011 11:07:00 PM
It flows with amazing energy Carolyn, it gives me a lift just to read it. :)
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Date: 10/30/2011 3:44:00 PM
wonderful poem...
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