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Race Me If You Dare

I have a weapon as you can see Leave me alone and let me be Going fast is my greatest need I was designed for high speed So far ahead on the final lap I can afford to take a nap So race me if you dare I'm not a tortoise I'm a hare

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/21/2009 6:06:00 PM
Hi Christina, you gave me a good laugh with your last two lines! I think you were writing about someone I know. Love this poem! Carolyn
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Date: 2/17/2009 11:08:00 AM
like the poem.......keep writeing
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Date: 2/17/2009 11:07:00 AM
love your couplet!!!!
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Date: 2/14/2009 12:49:00 AM
Very amusing write Christina.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/13/2009 11:14:00 PM
Christina - great use of an old fable in your poem - Great rhyme and flow with a message that had a taste of humor in the end - Loved the read - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/13/2009 7:05:00 PM
Wonderful work sister..enjoyed the read.
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Date: 2/13/2009 4:38:00 PM
Excellent work Christina and nice creativity...Raul
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Date: 2/13/2009 11:47:00 AM
Dude totally awesome i lika da hare
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Date: 2/13/2009 11:07:00 AM
Good for you! Running is a great high! Not that I do it ~lol~ but my best friend is a health crazed amazing person and I hear about it all the time. Thanks for your sweet comment, that meant so much to me! Just so you know I will be off the site for about a week. Hope to read more of your poetry when I get back. Take care! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/13/2009 11:00:00 AM
The rhyme is perfect and adds to the flow of this while the contents actually made me smile, remembering the story and now seeing how it pertains to life. Very well written. Michael
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Date: 2/13/2009 8:16:00 AM
LOL very clever cute and witty too
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Date: 2/13/2009 7:46:00 AM
hahaha... great image.. to see(:
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Date: 2/13/2009 7:37:00 AM
I loved this........... he will soon learn his lesson :-) ..........nice
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