Rabbit Holes

Replacing wishes with fantasy dreams, you ride life's wake on a surfboard of hopes. Subjected to laughter and silent screams, you're entangled in emotional ropes and lose your footing on slippery slopes. Exploring secret urges within you, floating feelings seem to last forever. Fabricating colors of every hue it's an extraordinary endeavor, the last time you felt like this; was never! Fairytales, rabbit holes, and magic pills, a wonderland of possibilities. Phantasmagorical worlds of thrills sidestep the horror and hostilities, freeing you of responsibilities. You're chasing a feeling that isn't real, navigating through a river of tears. For dope doesn't guarantee how you'll feel after all the partying, lies, and fears, and you cringe inside, hoping your head clears. (English Quintain) 4/3/2018
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Gentry Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 3:49 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done! Extraordinary imagery and profound message. :)
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June 25, 2018 at 5:14 PM
Thanks Susan, your visits are most welcome my friend, Emile.
Carber Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 2:24 PM
Congrats Emile!
Pinet Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 3:55 PM
Thanks L.J., I appreciate it my friend, Emile
Wolf Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 10:25 AM
Such vivid imagery and eloquent turns of phrases ... A bit surprising that this didn't rank a bit higher in the contests, BUT a placement is a placement is a placement, ala Gertrude Stein. This is a fave of mine. Bravo, Emile. Best wishes, Gershon
Pinet Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 11:42 AM
Thank you very much Gershon, I appreciate your support and kind words my friend, Emile.
Ashley Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 9:00 PM
Your poem conveys a strong message with metaphoric beauty and wondrous imagery. Congratulations Emile for your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Pinet Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 9:47 PM
Thanks so much Susan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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June 23, 2018 at 2:39 PM
Back with congrats on your win, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 4:08 PM
Thanks again Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 10:36 PM
Strong messaging with perfectly conjured imagery. A beautiful poem, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 6:01 AM
Thanks Line, your visits are most welcome my friend, Emile.
Sands Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Great descriptions Emile. Well written :)
Pinet Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 1:56 PM
Thanks Heidi, your visits are most welcome my friend, Emile.
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