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Rabbit Holes

Replacing wishes with fantasy dreams, you ride life's wake on a surfboard of hopes. Subjected to laughter and silent screams, you're entangled in emotional ropes and lose your footing on slippery slopes. Exploring secret urges within you, floating feelings seem to last forever. Fabricating colors of every hue it's an extraordinary endeavor, the last time you felt like this; was never! Fairytales, rabbit holes, and magic pills, a wonderland of possibilities. Phantasmagorical worlds of thrills sidestep the horror and hostilities, freeing you of responsibilities. You're chasing a feeling that isn't real, navigating through a river of tears. For dope doesn't guarantee how you'll feel after all the partying, lies, and fears, and you cringe inside, hoping your head clears. (English Quintain) 4/3/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/25/2018 3:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done! Extraordinary imagery and profound message. :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/25/2018 5:14:00 PM
Thanks Susan, your visits are most welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/24/2018 2:24:00 PM
Congrats Emile!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/24/2018 3:55:00 PM
Thanks L.J., I appreciate it my friend, Emile
Date: 6/24/2018 10:25:00 AM
Such vivid imagery and eloquent turns of phrases ... A bit surprising that this didn't rank a bit higher in the contests, BUT a placement is a placement is a placement, ala Gertrude Stein. This is a fave of mine. Bravo, Emile. Best wishes, Gershon
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/24/2018 11:42:00 AM
Thank you very much Gershon, I appreciate your support and kind words my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/23/2018 9:00:00 PM
Your poem conveys a strong message with metaphoric beauty and wondrous imagery. Congratulations Emile for your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/23/2018 9:47:00 PM
Thanks so much Susan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/23/2018 2:39:00 PM
Back with congrats on your win, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/23/2018 4:08:00 PM
Thanks again Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/3/2018 10:36:00 PM
Strong messaging with perfectly conjured imagery. A beautiful poem, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/4/2018 6:01:00 AM
Thanks Line, your visits are most welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/3/2018 10:50:00 AM
Great descriptions Emile. Well written :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/3/2018 1:56:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, your visits are most welcome my friend, Emile.

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