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Quoth My Daddy Nevermore

Once upon a midnight chilly, on a ladder acting silly, to my bedroom up I climbed and through my window slid. Moonlight through my bedroom flickered. To myself I softly snickered, feeling sure that once again my parents--oh, so clueless--did not know my deeds. I heard a knock and under covers hid. Dad stormed in with nails and hammer; then ensued a fearsome clamor as with seven nails he sealed my window and my fate. Then he wheeled around revealing ire that woke in me a feeling I would sneak out nevermore. Now weekends at home, I hate. October 5, 2018, entered in Juli-Michelle's Rhyme Battle XI

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Date: 10/12/2018 8:30:00 AM
OH YEAH!!!! why is it we think we 'INVENTED" all the games teenagers play. Well done Janice, a bit of poignant humor.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/12/2018 8:40:00 AM
Thanks so much, John! Janice
Date: 10/7/2018 9:34:00 AM
I love your parody!! Funny one.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/7/2018 12:03:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! Janice
Date: 10/6/2018 7:11:00 AM
A fun story..lovely rhymes..Best for a win, Janice
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/6/2018 9:43:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice
Date: 10/6/2018 6:20:00 AM
This hit me so suddenly, it made me laugh. I remembered so many childhood antics after reading it. Thank you Janice. Good luck in the contest!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/6/2018 9:43:00 AM
Thank you so much, Caren! Janice
Date: 10/5/2018 10:30:00 PM
I love your humor, Janice. Delightful.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/5/2018 10:42:00 PM
Thank you, Line! Janice

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