Quote Prompt 5

"I have dug my way out the ground with palm and fist many times- my whole life has been one burial after another; I will find my way out of you just fine." --rupi kaur
no one will steal my dignity... nothing can break my walls- I've learned that being with you strengthens my determination to let go- tediousness leaves unbelievable destruction- destruction left when I walked away.... Fictional Write November 7, 2016
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La France Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 6:04 PM
Laura congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautifully penned and emotional write ~
Canerdy Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 8:54 AM
A 7 for your thought-provoking, winning poem, Luloo! Janice
Dietrich Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 3:36 PM
another great response to a rupi quote. You are really on a roll with these. I sure enjoyed the two I saw today!
Daniel Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 2:15 AM
An awesome write for the prompt, Laura:)
Green Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 8:50 AM
Such a creative piece of writing that fits so well with the prompt. This was amazing to read and a beautifully formed poem. Really nice Laura.
Kannan Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 8:28 AM
A great write.... Well penned... A 7...
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