Tammy Reams Poet Free verse

Quote Me a Rumi

My chest falls from the swell as my breath growls and rushes to exhale
   
   Blueblood runs through my veins while with a sudden flash I can bestow the pain

   Martyr I am not but with a rumbling and roar I can strike with a shot

   Clouds will part with the darkest of black for when I am silent I will attack

   My ruby red lips with a spark at the tip will flare up and jolt like a whip

  So reverberate and respect me or feel the pulsate of my flame
  for upon your body I will spurt blisters and show the world your shame.

   Contest Sponsor by: Silent One 

Quote: 'When I am silent I have thunder hidden inside'.

  Placed 3rd

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Richard Lamoureux December 6, 2015 at 9:26 AM Works well with the quote you chose. Congrats. Tammy Reams December 7, 2015 at 11:49 AM Thank you very much Richard for the nice comment!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores December 4, 2015 at 7:00 AM Congratulations on the placement of the contest Tammy. Tammy Reams December 5, 2015 at 9:56 AM Thank you Nayda!

Anisha Dutta December 4, 2015 at 1:11 AM Congrats Tammy to win. I have also chosen same quote Anisha D Tammy Reams December 5, 2015 at 9:57 AM Thank you Anisha for the nice comment.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 3, 2015 at 11:09 PM Congrats on ur great win with this wonderful write Tammy! Tammy Reams December 5, 2015 at 9:57 AM Thank you for the nice comment Dr. Upma!

Michael Tor December 3, 2015 at 8:40 PM Tammy congratulations on your win!! Tammy Reams December 5, 2015 at 9:58 AM thank you Michael for the comment on my win!

Jan Allison December 3, 2015 at 6:08 PM Gosh Tammy the imagery is very deep and dark congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Tammy Reams December 5, 2015 at 10:02 AM Thanks Jan it was a fun write.

Skat A December 3, 2015 at 5:21 PM Tammy , Congratulations on your Quoting Rumi Win. SKAT ** Love Tammy Reams December 5, 2015 at 10:07 AM Thanks Skat for the congrats! Love back to you.

Cherl Dunn November 27, 2015 at 8:34 PM Dear Tammy So you are the silent eye of the hurricane, the hidden tempest wake that is raging in the distance before the swelling wave hits the shore, love this passionate poem it screams with the emotions of senuality, great job, good luck in the contest lady, cheri Tammy Reams November 28, 2015 at 5:12 AM What a wonderful comment Lady Cheri! Now in real life I'm really a very kind hearted person. The picture she had in the contest just makes it look to me as if you are alone but with a great power if needed.

Constance La France November 27, 2015 at 4:23 PM Tammy, this is wonderful for the contest, I chose the same quote, something about it just touched my heart, and I want to thank you so much for my awesome placement in your Mirror of Memories contest, I am very honored ~ Tammy Reams November 28, 2015 at 5:09 AM Thank you Broken Wing! Yes I loved this one also. Good luck in the contest.