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QUIXOTIC TILTING

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a russet acrobat, fur the color of burnt sugar, eyes bright beads of mischief. rain splatters, a mid-day drenching. he pauses, mid-scamper across the lawn, assesses the situation. then, inspiration! a maple leaf, crimson, almost comically large, detached, adrift. he seizes it, a tiny, frantic grab, and hoists it high~a quixotic tilting at the autumn sky. he struts, beneath his dripping canopy, a furry little king, conquered by autumn, but undefeated by drizzle.
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Gauthier Avatar
October 17, 2025 at 9:24 PM
You are so good at bringing little critters to life and showing us a glimpse at their whimsical lives.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 4:43 PM
awww, what kind words...thank you
Hind Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 12:26 PM
Love this, it's humorous :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 4:53 PM
thank you, sweet Paige!
Lawless Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 6:38 AM
beautifully done Sara...we all battle our own windmills and so appreciate a victory....
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 4:52 PM
I agree...we all 'tilt' windmills from time to time. Thanks for your visit, John.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 5:08 AM
Beautiful imagery…burnt sugar…maple leaf crimson and all!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 4:52 PM
awww, thank you
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