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Love quivers like dew drops on lotus leaves blush vermilion tint twilight gleam in eyes shine locked looks in eternal bond heart trembling fluttering craving hands clasped, oblivious surrounding home-coming birds in warm nest at sunset Written on February 16, 2022 A Brian Strand Visual Poetry Contest Syllables checked by HMS.com

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Date: 2/21/2022 3:46:00 AM
This is lovely!!
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Date: 2/16/2022 11:53:00 AM
Hello Mala, this is a beautifully done poem. i like the way the words flow. Love, & Friendship, Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/18/2022 4:09:00 PM
Hello Mala, you are welcome. Love &Friendship Darlene
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/17/2022 6:04:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene. Appreciate your lovely comment.

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